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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : the reason why people go to university. | |
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1. learn in-depth academical knoweldge
2. develop team working
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A survey has indicated that more than eighty percents of high school students in Korea go to universities. Some people denounce(denounce가 비난하다라는 뜻으로 쓰이나요?그렇다면
비난하다보다는 동의하지않는다/반대한다/이런식으로 쓰는게 더 낫지않을까..싶은데...) this tendency because university education is no more helpful to teenagers for their success. However, I strongly believe that university is still necessary for people who want to go ahead in a society because in university, they can learn in-depth academical knowledge and develop team working skills.
Most of all, university education is the desirable source for those who want to profound knowledge in certain subjects. Not only the lectures from eminent professors, but also various assignment like individual reports and group presentation force students to study materials in various methods. In other words, they can understand the contents better in a more effective way. For instance, I once was curious about the laws of thermodynamics when I was in a high school. So I read some books pertaing to chemistry and searh the internet to get more detailed information that would be useful to understand the laws well. But I could not fully satisfy with the materials. Three years past from then, I enter the university majoring in chemical engineering. Preparing for exams and huge amounts of assignment, I clearly understand ood not only the laws of thermodynamics which had not been established(had not comprehended for certain)/ in my head but also other related principles.
On top of that, students can improve the abilities to work as a team. In recent days, most universities require their students to organize groups by themselves and to do team projects. To finish their projects in time, they have to distribute each roles appropriately and work on their own parts deligently. In this process, students can naturally develop their team working skills. According to the survey by Samsung Economic Research Institution, seven of ten CEOs in large companies in Korea evaluate the cooperative abilities as the first condition when choosing their employees. As this survey has verified, people should learn to work as a team in university.
To summerize, university is the best place to get in-depth academical knoweldge and team working skills. In this regard, if people want to build up their abilities to succeed in their future lives, university education would be the conerstone to achieve the goal.
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