■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : In your country, is there more need for land to be left in tis natural condition or is ther more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? | |
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These days, public, organsations and government focus its attention on environmental problems as it rapidly exacerbates due to lots of destructive factors. However, as global financial crisis becomes serious and cities are centralised, people need to allocate their time and effort into developing housing and industry. The reason behind is because of a lack of housing and industries to support an increasing population's shelters and jobs.
First of all, people move to big cities due to various factors including more job opportunities. Centralisation in urban cities causes rise in housing prices as many competitors exist. Compared to the increasing number of people, availability of housing that middle class can afford is not adequate. According to a research conducted by a residential authority, the prices have increased by 30% in 4 years. This phenomenon strangles people to purchase a house to the point that they even have difficulty with the cost of livelihood and other daily expenditures. This research and public's struggle clearly show that the need of government's immediate action to construct more buildings to meet the demands and lower the abnormal prices.
Moreover, low employment rate is the main issue of the current economy. News reports that the society has hit the lowest rate in 20 years which reinforces the severity. More land has to be contributed to developing industries in order to create more available employments. From a process of building the industry to the completion, it requires thousands of workers. Many types of working positions are necessary for the construction such as labourers, architectures, carpenters and interior designers are. Even after the construction, people from different fields have opportunity to gain suitable positions such as engineers, officers, chemists and so on. These increased chances of being employed may boost the economy.
In conclusion, the pressing need to enhance people's quality of life overweighs the importance to preserve the land for the sake of nature. People's essence in life such as having secured shelter and jobs is protected by the wise land use for housing and industry urbanization.
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