It is often said that people learn about life the most by asking for advice to close acquaintance such as friends and family.(그냥 간단히, to close friends and family 하면 안될까요?) Some people maybe opposed to this idea because own personal experience also teaches them a lot of life lessons through stimulating ther own motives and five senses. However, from my point of view, advice from companions and family members is the most effective way of learning about livesfe. This is not only because they can give you practical advice but also people cannot experience all aspects of life on their own.
One reason why advice from close people is the best way to learn about life is that they are able to offer you useful advice. This is largely in part due to the fact that they are the people who know you better than anyone else that exist. In addition, they have similar experiences with me mine. To take an example, when I was in a high school, I had difficulty choosing my major for university. Since there were many subjects that I was interested in, I had to consider my interest and possible career path to decide my major. Unfortunately, I was not mature enough to know what I truely cared for and can do. However, thankfully, my mother had a similar experience with me when she was in my age and helped me to settle on the decision. It was very helpful because she knew my interest very well and compeletly understood me.
Furthermore, every people go through different experiences. Life is one time experience. People cannot experience more than one aspect of life at once. Yet, they are aware of different aspects of life as well because they hear (are acknowledged)from others' experiences. For example, my grandmother as a role model gave me many advices. Whenever I had bad things going on, my grandmother always told me about her experiences in a similar circumstance and then I could see my problem from a different angle. When I had a problem with my boy friend, who had to serve in military in three months, my grandmother told me about her boyfriend who had to attend a war in the past. I did not know whether I should break up with him or not since I was afraid of sending my boyfriend to somewhere dangerous. However, after listening to her, I changed my mind and realized that serving in the army is scary but for noble reasons, so there was no reason to break up with him..이야기를 끝내셔야죠)
To sum up, I strongly believe that the best way of learning about life is by gaining advice from friends and family. This is mainly because they know you very well and people cannot attain experences of every aspects by themselves. On the whole,a humanbeing is a social creature. They learn from each others and have developed in this way.(되도록이면 a human being단수로 앞에 쓰셨으면다음에 they 가 아니라 또 단수 똑같이 써주시는게 일관성있고 보기가 좋아요. 아님 둘다 복수로 쓰시든가.)
Thus, I firmly believe that it has will have the greatest effect when it is done with people who they love and care for.
>> Human beings are social creatures. They live together, learning from each others in a society.
Humans can develop themselves while socializing with others. It applies same to the learning methods for humans. They can learn the most effectively when others help them such as giving advices. .....blablabla.... It would be even more helpful to listen advices from close friends or family who are
caring and loving....
음 전체적으로 말한다면 안써도 될말들이 종종 줄줄 따라붙을때가 있다는건데 과감히 확떼서
던져버리시구요. 조그만 실수말고는 좋은 에세이 같습니다. 예들도 좋구요.
a, the 이런거 까먹지 마시구요.
gud luck
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