저 이번에 교환학생지원해요 ㅜㅜ 토플점수가 잘안나와서 커트라인넘겨서내는거지만 꼭 붙었으면 하는 바램으로 이렇게 지원할려구요.. 근데, 제가 자소서를써야되는데 첫번째 썼던게 별로라고 해서 새로썻는데 ㅜㅜ 일단 불량은 한매에요.. 첨삭해주실분도 사라저버렸고 너무 막막한 상황이라서 제발 부탁드립니다. 만약에 자소서가 이상하시다면 객관적인 견해좀 남겨주세요.. 일단 여기에 올리고갈테니까 첨삭 꼭해주세요 ㅜㅜ
혹시 교환학생갈때 쓰신 자소서있으시면 , 후한 마음으로 좀 부탁드릴게요 ㅜㅜ 참조좀하고싶습니다.
I was born on September 12th in Dae-Gu, a town situated in south part of the Republic of Korea. In my young age, my father used to have a business trip. In that time, my father and me have talk time for dream. I always asked by my father who has lots of experience in new paradime.. In terms of talking with father, I am getting interested in other country's culture. My mother believed she has decided to put me into an foreign language institution which offered English class for children who have interest about other language.
My father has always put emphasis on healthy way of life and sports, so he taught me all kinds of sports and exercises. This might be the reason why I became a very active and diligent person with a strong body and physical strength. . Then I got interested in computers. Since then foreign languages, computers and sports are my greatest hobbies and special skills at the same time. There are many factors which makes me enter the department of commerce and trade such as the interests of culture of all over the world, trade and love for foreign language. While I was studying about trade, I am getting interested in the distribution industry, fashion, fiber and circulation. I want to study fiber and fashion among the business items except for the trade the trade which is my major. So I became to enter the FISEP(fashion and international specialist education program) scholarship program.
Through the activity of FISEP, could get not only the fashion and fiber knowledge but also the improvement of foreign language's ability by internationalization training program.
Also, I could get the course of the culture of
As I studied the class related to the international distribution, I could realize the fact that the importance about distribution is growing.
For the purpose of achievement about substantial distribution's knowledge, I was working as a supporters of In-cheon Port Authority(IPA) and could get much of information .
One years ago, I attended economy camp. At there, many young people debate on a subject about
During the growth progress, there are lots of programs so called "growth sick" makes me have positive mind. Furthermore I can stand with new challenge.
And the interest of other country culture, trade and love for foreign language makes me have a passion to be a great trade master.
It's not only just trader, but I also want become a multiple-player trader. My point of view about multiple - player means to export and import a main product is that I want to say as a trader. I want to make multiple trade company which has handy infra for useful circulation cross the all over the world.
After I've studied as an exchange student, I will work for trade company or distribution company as a internship .
and I want how to work in the real situation. If only all of those are possible by exchange student.
Have a look "field and action of a stand"
From first step to a stand is really important role much as you know.
Would you mind giving a stand to me so that I can jump highly near to sky?