■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer
Topic :Technology has brought many advantages to human beings.
In this era of rapid social and technological changes that have led to a greater complexity, it is often said that the advanced technology has made a lot of precious contributions to people. I strongly agree with this statement. The rationale behind this belief is that such a rapidly grown technology simplified many of our time-consuming daily tasks. On top of that, it produced numerous useful inventions that help people retain their happy lives.
To begin with, the advanced techology significantly reduced the amount of time we spent for our works. This allowed people to use their valuable time to puruse their favortie recreatinal activities or habits. For example, about a decade ago, none of us had never imagined that we would be able to pay our taxations by using the Interent. At time time, not only the supply of personal computers was not sufficent to meet public's demand, but also the Internet market was not activated enough to provide such additional public services. However, in the modern world, many people do not even bother visiting a bank to pay their public service fares. It is now possible to deal with those issues by accessing to the Internet or automatic paying system. As a result, people possess a relatively longer free time compared to the past, which means they are free to do whatever they desire, guaranting a better standard of life.
In addition, the technology manufactured a lot of marvelous and also practical machineries that greatly help today's workers complete their jobs. Ironcially, the amount of time workers spend on their work had reduced, but their productivity has increased due to useful inventions. To cite a personal example, as a professional engineer, I mostly deal with my works by using a super computer. It calculates all measurements and materials that are needed for making a specific product. I surely have never thought of not using the computer to do any part of my job. However, my boss told me his story when he was working here a few decades ago. He said, at the time, there was only a small computer that only was able to contain a simple mathematic calculation. So, most of his time, he had to do all of his jobs by using his own brain and it surely took a great deal of time to do so.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people benefit a lot from today's technology. The truth of this argument becomes clear when we consider factors such as people now have more free time to enjoy their lives, and also technology greatly help workers improve their work efficiency.
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