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The lecture discusses the defects about the franchise company with a survey results. This dissents the reading passage's claim that being a franchise is effective to one's company.
giving up control to their products or services and must conforming their parent company. It contradicts the reading passage's argument that being a franchise is assured in quality and popularity.
Second, they frustrate in marketing. Their incomings must be paid to parent company partially for national marketing. So, they couldn't advertise in their areas. This fact directly opposes the reading passage's assertion that franchise could save money on advertisement.
Third, the worst drawback of being a franchise is that they have to pay royalty to their parent company for the use of system which is unprofitable and too high without return. It strongly contradicts the reading passage's claim that being a franchise lowers the rate of failure.
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