■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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After 20 years, people will be able to have more leisure time(free time) than now. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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Nowadays, labor time is fixed by some law in all occupations. Regardless what occupation, people usually work about 9 hours in a day. The demand, for the welfare of the work employees, made law for their working hours necessary. For that reason, I believe that working time will gradually be reduced eventually, and people will get more free time than as now in the future, and because of technology and well-equipped work environment and personal life-style.
Decreased working time by improved technology will provide more free time. It is easy to find many convenient soft wares and programs to arrange our task such as arranging records. 20 years ago, people spent a lot of time to arrange their assigned work to submit to their supervisors and group leaders. People used scrap pictures to attach on a report and even it was not usual to use computer programs. Today, their work incredibly is simplified by they use of computer soft wares like Power Point, Excel, Word, Photoshop and so on. These convenient tools have led to our shortened period for work. Beside, there has been a tendency that people handle work in their houses through the Internet. They do not even need to spend time to go to their work sites.
Changing life-styles and new culture bring more leisure time to people. Our society has been changed a lot from relationship focalized society to individual life-type. In Korea, we still have to spend considerable time to take care of our family and friends. For example, I have to visit my home town twice or three times in a year, and I consume substantial times to maintain my relationship with friends. Unfortunately, we are gradually isolated by rapidly changing society. People prefer their privacy and to live by themselves, and they enjoy playing computer games alone as well. While we have been isolated, inversely, we would get more extra time because we do not need to take a time to take care for others.
When I say, "I am tired," my mother talks about her memories that she used to work more than 10 hours in a day in a poor place that was not well-equipped, and it was traditionally mandatory to take care of her younger brothers and sisters after she finished her work. However, nowadays, people work in very efficient environment that make shortened work time, and improved personal life possible. For these reasons, it becomes imperative that will get more leisure time in our future. |
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