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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Because modern life has become complex, young people should have the ability to plan and organize. | |
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It is often said that making a plan prior to starting to take off is not necessary or rather useless because in a rapidly changing modern society, there are lots of unexpected situations which should be dealt with promptly. However, I believe that the ability to make a plan and prepare for the worst in advance is important more than ever for the two reasons: to work efficiently and to keep one's life more fruitful.
To begin with, making a plan and organizing everything a person has to accomplish plays a significant role in doing something/- working, studying, traveling and other things - effectively. (play a significant role to accomplish most of activites effectively....) Although it takes some time to plan ahead, at the end, it will save more time by doing so. This is because planning prioritizes everything in order, which prevents one from overlapping work. According to a study conducted by the Havard university in 2007, two groups were put into the project to compare the level of performance. One group was asked to plan out the daily tasks, and the other group was asked to perform in impromptu mode. The result was that the former group performed significantly faster without much repetition of work,(간단히, with much higher quality of work than the latter group) and the quality of work was much better than the latter group, who worked as they went.
In addition, one's capability of planning and organizing can help one's life become more manageable and fruitful. With so much events going on nowadays in a person's life, planning becomes necessary in order to maintain a balance in life. Life can become more enjoyable and less hectic when one can plan out an agenda which covers different parts of life such as work, play, and love. For example, my friend Jun Kim who is an exceptional planner, planned out a dream vacation six months in advance. He asked around his family and friends to see if they would be interested in joining him, and also checked out the discount packages through the traveling agencies. finally, he ended up having a stresss-free vacation at a very low price.
In brief, competence in planning and organinzing is imperative to improve the work efficiency and to enjoy not only well-managed but also fruitful life. People, especially young people, should be well-equipped with this quality living in this complex modern society.
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