■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : some countries, people are no longer to smoke in many public place and office buildings.
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According to the number of dead by smoking have been more and more incresing annually, the social tendency would intend to prohibit smoking. actually, smoking in place which is a lot of people, it is not guilt, recognized what it could not. especially, the country such like Butan, the sale of cigarette is prohibited by law. although many smokers could strongly opposite this atmosphere, it would be certainly recommeded many counties.
first of all, although its cost is just 2 thousand won in korea but the cigarette somke contains 2 thousand number of substance of causing cencer. smoking the cigarette is influenced not only smoker but also non-smoking people as bad side of health. example, the women working at restrant that main customer is taxi driver file a suit against tabaco company. the reason is that she got a lung cencer by indirect smoking because of smoking in indoor space by taxi drivers. it is excessive example that smking is influenced both smoker and non-smoking people.
another reason is that there is some smokers who want to give up smoking. social trend that encourage prohibiting smokeing are helping them. in currently the corporations want to recurit non-smoking people and army is acting the ststem that give the reward to the soldiers who give up the cigarette. society could provide better opportunity to people who do not smoke cigarette. and it would serve making a healthy social.
in conclusion, the cigarette is just favorite thing, it is influenced the nagative effect for people and society. therefore these tendency must be maintain though people's intention. | |
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