■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. | |
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In modern society, there is a rapid increase in the number of big cities, and many people move into the house of the city. Some people argue that the big city is better since it can provide the children with good education. However, the family with children can have more benefit when they live in the countryside because the children can grow up well both physically and mentally as well the advantage that the countryside provides is very educational and helpful to them.
Firstly, living in the countryside gives the opportunity for youngsters to train their body and mind maturely. This is mainly because that the countryside environment reduces the pressure of studying hard at their young age, and they can play themselves in the nature very freely. To illustrate, I can not only go to the field every weekend, but I also play with my friends all the time without any interruption. I believe that this makes my body stronger due to this outdoor activities and also having healthful food containing sufficient vitamins and other ingredients. In addition, although I and my parents haven’t worried about my education until my elementary school, I could get good grades in every test since I actually have enjoyed my study without concern.
Furthermore, the countryside gives many advantages to the children. The main reason of this is that the children can be given the essential foundation to be useful for the rest of the whole life. To illustrate, my village’s major industry is farming, so it is possible to get a close relationship with every person living together in a small city. Thus, the adults had many chances to teach us about the importance of many lessons for our future. Especially, my town emphasizes the importance of modesty and humanity. Also, they taught lots of wisdom of practical life. Even though it seems to be nothing helpful to our life, I will enter my future company successfully based on these childhood lessons. To be more specific, when I have the job interview after I grow up, the judge will ask me “Describe the most important lesson that you heard.” To this question, according to the valuable lessons in my childhood, I will be able to respond to this question very successfully.
In conclusion, although the city life has advantages in education or its convenience, because of the chance to make yourself mature physically and mentally and many valuable benefits that only can be obtained in the countryside, I firmly agree with the statement. All things considered, the countryside life can be of being help for the success in life of the children. |
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