Today’s universities provide various of departments and curriculums for students. However, unlike the development in academic departments, there are still some universities which have scarce surroundings for sports curriculums. To those universities, I strongly argue that sport activities should be given a same amount of money as same as university libraries are given for several reasons.
To begin with, sport activities are necessary for youths. Sports are their rescuer to resolve their stress due to the assignments given by professors, pressure from parents to study hard, problem with finding jobs for future career. Playing football, badminton and basketball gives a temporary pause for their harsh lives. Sports are one of the most important friends for today’s university students. It is an unfortune indeed that there are no proper facilities in some universities for students.
Furthermore, students’ health requires sport activities. Since most university students are run out of time, they prefer taking fast foods and not exercising to earn time for studying. However, a lot of intake of fast food and unsatisfying exercise cause unhealthy body. Whatever students study, healthy body is necessary factor of good student. They should keep their body shape healthy, which means they have to play sports constantly. It is universities’ responsibility to guarantee sports activities and facilities to students.
Some might disagree with my idea because he or she would think that investing on school libraries and other academic facilities are more effective than investing on sports activities. However, this argument is not realistic. Although development in school libraries assists students a lot with studying more profound, growth of sports facilities and activities are also influential on students’ work. For example, according to one survey, 60% of university students have answered that playing a sport with friends remove the stress and allows them study better. Thus, the claim that investing on the libraries is more helpful for pupils than investing on the sports activities is inaccurate.
We must remain that reinforcing the academic fields are always valuable for students. Today students are rather willing to have an exciting sports game to remove their stress and be healthy.
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