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Nowadays Jaebeom, the leader of popular boy band 2PM, issue is boom. These days, many entertainment agencies have brought foreign teenagers to prepare international idol groups that appeal to both the interior and the outside. I think that many foreign teenagers undergo difficult thing at a young age to live in a new country. Jaebeom, also that. Jaebeom’s issue makes him to quit the singer. At the center of the controversy are negative comments Jaebeom recorded on his personal website. Some Korean netizens searched the comments and it spread rapidly. He apologize his speaking in the past but netizen get angry. Finally Jaebeom has officially withdrawn from the group.
In my opinion, Jaeeom’s experience is too hard. These comments were not public opinion on Korea of Korean people, but a teenager speaking on a personal website. This time that prepare to be group was hard to him. Quitting the group and leave the country is too harsh.
Among the teenagers, decorating personal website is boom. On the Internet, many teenagers appeal their picture, UCC and opinion. Personal website is individual space extremely. Also Jaebeom is public man now but the comments wrote the past. He took an active part in his entertainment filed. So we think about his effort.
Some people are calling him another steve seungjun Yoo, but it should not be compared to Yoo’s case. I think that Internet user think on more time before speaking about something quickly. So I wish that netizens have awareness to see more accurately.