A survey of a bookstore in Korea shows that the number of people who find the books about the way to success are incresasing in recent days. This trend reflects their curiosity about what skills they must improve to be successful in their lives. Among many important skills, I believe that people should enhance their communication abilities because they can make good relationship with collegues and convey their opinions without any misgivings.
Most of all, communication skills are necessary to get along with collegues. In general, people who have succeed in their lives have a good relationship with anyone. The significance of personal relationship is getting bigger because we meet various people overcoming many situations. For example, my uncle was not an extraordinary kid when he was young except he had numerous friends. Although he do not excel in any areas over others, he became an assemblyman last year. He told me that people around him have made him succeed. In addition, he always emphasizes the importance of sustaing relationships with anyone who have met before because it can be helpful in any moments. Therefore, success often comes from the men around you.
On top of that, right communication skills are helpful to convey your opinion well. Even if someone comes up with a great idea, it is useless when the thought is not said to others rightly. In addition, people sometimes make mistakes when talking to others. Those can be overcomed if you improve your communication skills. For example, Samsung electronics, which is one of the greatest companies in Korea teaches how to communicate well to their newbies. The CEO of that company says that he sets the first priority for choosing employees at the abilities to speak their opinion. In this regard, communication skills are the cornerstone of success.
In conclusion, it is quite obvious that the abilities of communicating with others help people to be successful in thier lives in that the skills help them make good relationship with others and give their opinion without any misgivings.
별것도 없는 내용인데.. 40분이나 들었네요 ㅠㅠ 아후, 왜케 오래걸리지.
특히나 paraphrasing이 너무 어려워요.. 같은 말 더 쓰게 되고..
make a good relationship with 이거 계속 쓰고..
communicaion skill을 어떻게 바꿔써야 할지도 모르겠고..
시험 21일인데 큰일났어요.. 라이팅 25점만 넘었음 좋겠는데..
많은 조언 부탁드립니다 ..꾸벅.. |