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The lecture discusses the defects about the franchise company with a survey results. This dissents the reading passage's claim that being a franchise is effective to one's company.
First, the company faces some unexpected challenges. They are not free to decide what products or services to sell. In other words, being a franchise means giving up control to their products or services and must conform their parent company. It contradicts the reading passage's argument that being a franchise is assured in quality and popularity.
Second, they frustrate in marketing. Their incoming must pay to parent company partially for national marketing. So, they couldn't advertise in their area. This fact directly opposes the reading passage's assertion that franchise could save money on advertisement.
Third, the worst drawback of being a franchise, they have to pay royalty to their parent company for use of system which is unprofitable and too high without return. It strongly contradicts the reading passage's claim that being a franchise lowers the rate of failure.