■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : roommates 이랑 기숙사에 살아야한다면 대학에서 roommates를 정하는ㄱ 좋나 내가 choose하는게 좋나 | |
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As I used to live in rural area, I had to move to a city to attend high-qualified university. There was no choice for me but to live in a dormitory, and I encountered lots of difficulties with my roommates. While going through my school life, I realized that it is important for me to choose my own roommate, even though my school did not allow it, as I could avoid personality conflicts and could bond with my roommates more. If I have chances to choose my roommates, I would be able to be free from conflicts, which allows me to have a better life in the university. There are nothing more irritating and stressful situations than living in dormitory with roommates who have dissimilar personalities and characteristics. Suppose there is a roommate who usually turns on TV loud and stay up until late night. However, I go to sleep early for next day and study during evening. Then, I would get bothered from him when I study while he would be also annoyed as I would always insist him to turn off TV. Moreover, I might not able to have sound sleep, which could cause serious problems regarding my studying, physical and mental health. As we have different life style, we both would have conflicts, leading us to get not only stress, but also disappointment and frustration. Hence, it would be best for me to choose my roommates who have similar personalities and characteristics in order to have better life in the university. In addition, I could bond more with roommates that I choose to live with, enabling me to broaden my social networks. There is no doubt that I would like to have roommates who could cooperate and understand each other well. Thus, we would have more chances to unite, do extra curricular activities and other social activities, rather than having fight or conflicts. This sort of interaction could be beneficial for my life as I could get assistance whenever I have problems such as financial problems as well as having great time. Also, the relationship could be remained even after graduation. For example, I'm currently living in university dormitory with three roommates. Even though I did not choose the roommates, fortunately, we all have similar hobbies. We go outside to play soccer, basketball or do volunteer works together. No matter how much conflicts we encounter, we endure it and bond with one another. We are so closely related that we are like family who always stay with me when I have serious problems. I believe this relationship was able as we all had similar characteristics. Therefore, as the best way to find roommates who have similar personalities and features is to choose whom to live together, it is preferable for me to choose roommates.
In conclusion, it would be better for me to choose my roommates as I could get ride do a variety of personality conflicts and I could cooperate well with my roommates. This is especially important as conflicts have no more results than irritation, frustration and annoyance. | |
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