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In this lecture, the speaker claims that the hammerhead shark’s unique shape is advantageous is unclear. This opposes the reading’s assertion that their flat head has specific merits.
First, the speaker maintains that their head do not strengthen their vision. They are able to know the depth of the prey only when they are distant objects. Also, their eyes have drawbacks with blind spot so they can catch only front obstacles. This counters the reading’s clam that they can see 360 degrees and the depth of their prey with their eyes.
Second, the speaker argues that the shark’s sense of smell is regular not special comparing other types of sharks. While it is revealed that Great White sharks have ability to detect blood, there are no study that prove the hammerhead sharks have better sense of smell than others. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that they have better sense of smell because of shape of head.
Lastly, the speaker points out it is not true that the hammerhead sharks can turn fast with their thin head. Through video tapes, scientists found that the sharks have flexible backbones than others. It is the real reason that they can move quickly. This rebuts the reading’s claim that their unique head form make them turn swiftly than others.
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