▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that the characteristic appearance of the hammerhead sharks gives them some specific advantages. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that their unique feature of head may not strengthen the ability to see. This is because they They (this is because는 적절하지 않는 표현 입니다) have blind spot, which is are (blind spots는 복수 주어 입니다) critical drawback to the sharks to identify and catch their prey. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that vision of the sharks is enhanced by their unique structure of the head. Next, the professor insists that the distinguishing head structure allows them to have a good sense of smell. The sense of smell of other sharks is also as good as that of the hammerhead shark. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that the shape of the shark’s head gives it a better sense of smell because they have a larger nasal passage with more smell sensors. Finally, the professor argues that it is wrong for the hammerhead shark to be able to turn its body quickly thanks to their special head shape. Researchers figured out that they can turn their body in a short time not because of their head structure but because of their flexible backbone. This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that the third benefit which is attributable to their head shape is that the animal turn quickly. by using head sharks can turn its head very quickly.
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