■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you think advertisements affect people a lot? Why? | |
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Nowadays, advertising play an important role in selling products of most companies. 'Propaganda' is not a unfamiliar word today, because companies try to almost brainwash their consumers, like dictators did in the past. I strongly believe that advertising affects the way in which people buy products, since companies have good marketing skills, make people expose a lot to ads and exaggerate.
These days, companies, especially big companies have astonishing marketing skills. In order to remain their products in consumer's memory, companies attempt to produce impressive commercials. They hire popular celebrities as models of their products or copywriters to make creative advertisements. Corporations also utilize effective ways of publicizing. One good example is targeting advertisement, which is very efficient when it is used to persuade targeted customers.
Next, people are exposed a lot to advertisements of many products or services. Advertisements are seen almost everywhere. By seeing the same ads too often, people become to believe what they see. Remembrance marketing is a marketing which use that trait of people. This makes people to be exposed to the name of products, services or companies for a long time. Calenders or ball point pens are perfect examples of remembrance marketing.
Finally, corporations often exaggerate about their items. They always show only benefits to public and sometimes even overstate benefits of their products. Thus, all commodities seem good and many consumers are persuaded by these exaggerations. As a matter of course, a lot of customers are blinded by lure of companies because they can only see strong points.
To conclude, I think that advertisements influence a lot in decisions of consumers, for companies have marvelous skills of persuading people, people are exposed to ads a lot, and products always seem good thanks to overstating. | |
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