■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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Topic : What is the most valuable gift for the children |
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As society become rich and convenient, parents also become spoiled to give a present to the children.
They give a child money instead of their time, effort ,but as the child grow they will recognize there's more important than
money and only can learn from their family. I want describe few of qualities that we could learn from the families.
First, social skills . Since family is the basic composition of organizations, we born to the family. So we could first learn from the families.
After we are born ,we are learning how to interact with parents. Babies need to talk to with eat, with sleep and other things as well. That is the first stage of
social life.During that times interaction with parents could remain their memories forever, and will effect their whole life. Also as the child grow they will learn basic
manners in their house to prepare to get along with society. By that time it does not seem big, but how to teach their children will make their personality.
For example, if they did not teach how to share with their friends then the child tend to not share with others as they learned. (curt)
Second, confidence the supporting from their family. Especially their parents. As we grow we are not just staying at home, we have to learn from school ,work and
other places as well. But we facing lots of experiences that we never learned. That learning experience sometimes make us
discouraged and disappointed.
We need to shelter and supporter that we can rely on, so those times we may have courage to face. In addition we know somebody always stay there support us with
infinite love and trust. Particularly that is our parents.
Even our society changed rapidly and make family less important . Still families have lots of important roles that can not replace with other things.
Like wise parents's love , basic education ,or other qualities as well ,even though I did not explained. Those things are we can only obtain from the families.
So I think family is most valuable gift that a child can have .
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