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0048 People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Why people work for? Everyone needs to work for many different reasons. Some might work only for the money they need to get out of financial hardship while others work for more than money. However, in my opinion, as a human being, all we work not only for the money we need, but also high values we can have from working. I believe there are three significant reasons people work for.
Firstly, as working, we can improve our life. In order to work, we should interact with people and communicate with customers, colleagues and his boss. It requires us to improve communication skill how to connect with people well around work. Furthermore, we learn many aspects of knowledge to solve problems and other work skills such as technology, languages or presentations. All of these make us knowledgeable and skillful. If we don’t work and stay at home all day, how we improve us intelligent without work and social experiences?
Secondly, it gives us a great opportunity to feel a sense of achievement Working requires occasionally for us to finish an important project or a big deal. Through attaining the mission, we face unexpected matters and a number of obstacles. However, when we achieve the goal, it provides us confidence to get over any difficulties. We have the feeling only we achieve a challenge at work. Working is not just hardship to earn money. It makes us feel a sense of achievement.
Lastly, we receive job satisfaction when we enjoy working. People like to work what they enjoy. If so, they can put passion, voluntary efforts and contributions on it. To do that, working is not only for the money. It becomes what they would like to do. Nevertheless, working is necessary for living, we can also enjoy working because we love to do. Even if some musicians make small amount of money, they don’t complain about working. For them, working is their life and passion.
In conclusion, from my point of view, I think people don’t work just for the money. There are three conspicuous aspects of working; improvement, achievement, job satisfaction. All of these make us to work for more high values than money. I firmly believe our life will be more valuable through working.