Topic :
해커스Writing교재 진단평가 시간 정확히 재서 손으로 Writing해본거구요..
정확한 평가를 위해 일체의 수정도 가하지 않은 글입니다..
Writing 해커스에서 주말에 수업 한번 들은게 다구요.. 시험은 한달여 남았어요 ㅠㅠ
첨삭을 바라는건 아니구요
이 정도로 쓰면 제가 지금 어느 정도 점수대고, 어느 부분을 보완해야 하는지,
한달 내에 얼마나 올릴 수 있을지만 알려주셔요.. ㅠㅋ
1. 통합형
The lecturer doesn't agree with the passage which contains the benefits of getting up early.
First, he says that if a person gets up early, he also has to sleep at earlier night. Trying to
get up early not having slept earlier the last night can cause health failure. In this context,
he refutes the opinion of the passage that people can use the extra times for constructive puprposes
created by getting up early.
Second, he thinks that not all people can be vigorous in the early morning. Each person has his
natural body rythm and someone who can't adjust to early birld would be groggy at that time.
He might do nothing else in that state. That view casts the daubts on the passage-mentined benefit
that early birds can focus on the task well in silence.
For those reasons, He doesn't advocate the view of passage; 'The early bird gets the warm'