Positive side of globalization
Globalization happened these days by developing the internet and transportation. As a result, many countries conclude a treaty and form partnership at many parts and people can go everywhere range of a day. So, we live in a global built on interdependence.
Nowadays, as the internet connection and transportation system have been developing, it is globalizing through all over the world. Many nations get involving many types of unions and get partnerships for their economical benefits or safety issues. So we live in mutual relationship among countries.
Nations share many things they need through trades. Importing we need and exporting others need. So, we can find many things from other countries everywhere. For example, people, live in the south pole, can eat bananas and pineapples. In other words, people can use everything from other countries.
Nations share many types of their sources through trades such as work force, natural resources and expertise. It is easy to find things out that are not indigenous. For example, people who live in cold areas can eat tropical fruits like bananas and pineapples. In other words, it doesn’t matter where the goods and needs are originally located to be utilized.
It is easy to go other countries through developed transportation. Before developed transportation, It was very hard to go to abroad. But we can go everywhere for meet people through airplane, train and car. If you want to go a singer’s concert, you can go. And you can enjoy your summer vacation at
It is much easier to go other countries through developed transportation system than the past. People had to spend much time to visit other nations, but we can go wherever we want through many types of vehicle. It is not exaggerations I can enjoy a singer’s recital which would be performing the other side of the earth from my location and I can enjoy my summer vacation in
You can see news about all over the world. If some events happen, we can see it quickly on television or the internet. When the World Cup and the Olympic games were open, all people in the world saw these at the same time. So people felt happiness together. And It is easy to hear news about affair in the world like terror and pirate.
As the internet service and television system have been developing, we can access any kinds of news easily that were happened somewhere in the earth. It is not limited only accidents’ news like terrorism or collisions among nations. Also we share big sports events like World Cup and Olympic Game at the same time. During broadcasting the games, people laugh and cry together.
I also feel globalization everyday. I often watch European soccer and American baseball and basketball and meet my international friends through messenger. In addition, I sometimes go to abroad for sightseeing, shopping and study.
In addition, I often watch European soccer and American baseball and basketball games through televisions. As a result of easy accessing with other nations’ culture, it makes me easy to get along with foreigner friends and to travel other countries.
Globalization has many positive parts like this. Someday, all countries will be the one. Many problems will happen in this process. But for solving this problem, the key is just globalization.
Globalization has many positive effects. I guess that all countries may unite for the one. There must be a lot of problems are occurred. Globalization would be a great key to minimize the potential problems.
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