■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :People are never satisfied with what they have;
they always want something more something different | |
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With a rapid developing of life standard, It is evident that most people persue better and more thing in order to increase quality of their life. This is becuase people's desire is endless. I strongly agree that people is not satisfied with what they already have. As a result, not only that people would buy something that they don't plan to buy but also they spend a large amount of money improving thier appearance.
To begin with, sometimes people would purchase what they don't plan to buy in order to satisfy their desire. They want to purchase better something after seeing a particular advertisement. Moreover the purpose of advertisement evokes people to buy their products spontaneously. The best example is commecials of cell phone. Cell phone is not too expensive and easy to bring in my pocket. And a company of cell phone spur people's instict to get more gorgeous and convenient things through a media such as radio , TV , poster by using celebrities. As a result , cell phone is selling out whenever new products come out. I think the reason why a cell phone company make a lot of money is that they have know a endless desire people have. Therefore sometimes people buy what they don't need.
Additionally, most women want to be more beautiful and slim. Absolutely they could exercise in order to lose weight. However, they choose a drastic way such as plastic surgery although they already have good looking apperance. For instnance, It is not hard to find article in newpaper in plastic surgery of celebrities. Moreover we can see easily people who take surgery. This is becuase they isn't satisfied with what they have and even consider a certain portion of their appearance to be flaws. To take a personal example, I have a friend who want to get plastic surgery. On graduating highschool , she got more beautiful after surgery but she was't satisfied with it. One day I overheard she is going to get one more plastic surgery. Actually I don't understnad why she want to do more. But when taking people's endless desire into consideration, we cannot judge her.
To conclude, I stronly agree that people cannot esaily satisfy what they have. They always want someting more and different. Becuase of that, a much more number of advertisement evokes people to buy something they don't need as well as plastic surgery is getting to be popular. But we have to remember what this saying goes, " Don't judge a book by its cover". I think we should find a indeed meaning of life is not superficial. | |
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