■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : 인터넷은 학생이 학습할때 효율적이다 (agree/disagree)
(25분에 이만큼.. 아이디어가 더 좋으면 원이 없겠어요..ㅠ.ㅠ)
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Some people think that using the Internet hinders stuying of students because they are influenced by uncontroble materials negatively. On the other hands, the others believe that the Internet is the effective tool to improve the students' studies in that students can meet enormous helpful matrails and save their studying time. In my opinion, I totally agree with the latter and can mention some specific reasons to support my idea.
To begin with, the Internet provides an efficient way when students serach the materials they want. Therer are uncountable materils such as professional papers, electronic books and so on in the Internet library. Generally, for example, university students are required by the classes that they should submit assignments including the paper works and presentation. It is sometimes close to be professional and well-organized. When students search the materials through the Internet, it is possible for them to find out more materials for the assignments from various resources, even from professional persons whom they do not know. This is also the biggest advantage of the Internet.
Moreover, students may undergo the lack of time because of many assignments and activities. In this points, using the Internet is so efficient that students can reduce the time consuming and organize their schedules appropriately. If they have to go to the univeristy library whenever they need the materials for assignments, it would take longer time to search them. Also, whenever they want to ask a question to teachers or professors, they do not have to visit their offices. By sending the e-mail, it is possible to contact to professors and to obtain the answers they want to know. Under my experience, when I had a question about the final paper, my advisor was away from her office. Soon after sending the e-mail with the questions, I could receive the her advice without the meeting in person. It is beneficial for me to complete my paper until the due.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the fact that the Internet is a effective tool on the studying of students. When it comes to gaining numerous matarial and reduction of time-consuming, using the Internet is so efficient that students can accomplish their works better. | |
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