■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Some people think that people will have more free time for their leisure activities, whereas others believe that they won't. Considering which one is more likely to happen, I would like to side with the former people. This is due to the fact that people's life quality has been being improvied. In addition, more and more leisure facilities are increasing nowadays.
To start with, it is true that quality of people's lives is getting better. That is, more people would tend to pay attention their well-being life rather than work. I am aware that working is a very important part of our lives and many people prefer having appropriate job to taking a rest. However, along with the increased GDP rate in one's society, tendency about work and leisure also started to change. For example, when I worked for a company as an internship, one of seniors always talk to me about her hardship. According to her, she didn't have any free time for her family and herself due to significant overwork and got stressed so much. After a few months later, she finally decided to trasfer another company which ensure her more free time. Now she is satisfied with her life and spend more time for enjoying leisure activities with her family. I firmly believe that she is not the only one who wanted to reduce working time.
On top of that, many facilities for leisure activities are under the construction. Although there exist some places for people's amusement and sports activities, I think it still is not enough to cover a wide range of people who want to enjoy their leisure activities. In this sense, it is very positive to build a lot of public leisure center in the city. For example, a government of Seoul City is restructuring Han-River Park. It's purpose is to provide people with more opportunities for enjoying leisure activities. After finishing it's construction, many citizens will use this facility and have a enjoyable time with their family or friends. This kind of social infrastructure will make people have more entertaining time for their lives.
Taking all of these things into account, people will have much pastime for their leisure purpose because of increased quality of life and leisure facilities.
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