■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :0014 Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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Prevalent education forms in Korea or other countries are often considered as rigid and strict. This could be attributed to enforcement of classes regardless of student’s creativity, capability and interest. Although the policy of university that requires students to attend particular classes might have some benefits, it should be optional. This is because it could raise productivity of education and offer flexibility of schedule.
When students could freely choose their classes, they could learn as efficient as possible. Students would choose classes they really want to attend, which could be resulted in positive effect to their education. For example, as it could be seen from a number of cases such as Bill Gates and Oprah Wanffrey, students who could enjoy what they learn have more chances to be succeeded in their fields. According to the study conducted by Economics, many professors have revealed that enjoyment could be directly connected to concentration and productivity of education. To specify this, they suggested one experiment. There were two groups comprising 50 students. To one group, students were required to take classes while the other one had rights to choose. After few days, all of them had test and students who had freedom to choose had higher grades. Therefore, I believe classes should be optional for the efficiency of classes.
Moreover, students could have flexible schedules. This is particularly important as they will have enough time to participate in various activities including volunteer works and internships, which could offer well-round education. Needless to say, those could help them to be successful in future. For example, people will be well known of Ban Gi-moon who is the chief of the UN. What distinguish him from other people are his diverse activities he had in the university. He not only took part in a lot of volunteer works, but he also worked in Korea Banks, Korean department of environment and economy as an intern. Overall experiences have led him to climb up to his current status. Thus, students should freely choose classes since they should have time to do other important activities.
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