■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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In Korea, our ancestor have worn in different ways according to what they work. The kind of clothes is various from a slave to a king. By wearing a specific clothe, therefore, their behavior also is different and people around one who put on a specific clothe think and behave differently. So, I agree with the idea that people behave differently when they wear different clothes. There are two reasonable reason why I think so and I present now.
Firstly, we feel ourselves in different ways whether we act actively or not when we put on specific clothes. Most People think that people have to act properly according to their clothe put on now. For example, imagine you wear a business suit. You must feel yourself that you do not act actively, but are well-mannered. Also, when you wear a work clothe, you feel yourself carefully in work in any place. In the past, in victorious armies, victor commonly would strip their prisoners of their clothes, the prisoners felt intimidated and powerless. They were finished as fighters, and no longer capable of effective resistance. In the past and today, we can feel ourselves that how we behave in different ways as we wear some clothes you want.
Furthermore, people around one who put on a specific clothe would see and deal with you differently when you wear a specific clothe. If you wear a casual clothe for a meeting, people think that you are comfortable and they talk to you comfortably. By contrast, a suit is perfectly consistent with dignitary. For illustrate, in the past, some people in the low level used to lower their heads when they saw a well-dressed person. At this point, we can know that people could assume a level by seeing a clothe at that time. Therefore, also, in the past and today, people feel themselves that how they act to a person put on a certain clothe.
To sum up, a specific clothe has a ability to how people think and act for themselves or other people, and in all ages, this practice maintain without any changes. So, I firmly believe that people behave in different ways when they wear certain clothes. | |
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