■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Money gurantee one's happiness? | |
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Nowadays, some people believe riches are always content because they do not have to work or worry about money. In my opinion, however, individuals' pleasure is not related with money. This is because people are incapable of being satisfied with what they have and money has limited functions.
Firstly, people are never delightful with their living because they are insatiable with their own possessions. This is because they always want what they don't have. It's their innate to have desire about possession. For example, during childhood days, some children are prone to buy more and more dolls even if they have so many kinds of dolls. Children usually think they have to buy more dolls because their dolls should be more cute or prettier than their friends' dolls. Adults are same, because they are longing to earn and gather more money even if they have enough money to live. Therefore, people imprudently want more and more to get momentary happiness.
Secondly, people are not able to do everything with money that they have. They cannot feel true happiness and receive true love with money. For example, my friend's aunt is rich and has a magnificent house. She thought she could do and achieve everything with money that she has. She married a man and she thought she could live happily ever. Later, she realized that her husband married her because of her money. She got mad and finally they were divorced. She believed money can make people content corporeally rather than bring happiness to spiritual mind.
In conclusion, money is not form of an item that guarantees one's happiness. This is because people's unlimited want and money's limited functions. If people want to live blissful lives, they have to rely on their spirits rather than money. | |
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