■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Eating homemade food is better than eating out at restaurants or food stands. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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As today society required the fast pattern to do something, restaurants have become popular in that they help people to save time and to have the meeting others. However, in my opinion, it is hard to mention that eating outside such as a restaurant is better than eating homemade foods. This is because eating out at a restaurant have some drawbacks; the lack of nutrition and hinderance of time with family.
To begin with, it is obvious that a restaurant provides people convenience and time saving. When we use the restaurant, we do not need to prepare the foods so that it allows us have extra time for doing others. However, it is impossible whether foods by restaurants provide the balancd nutritions or not. Becasue we, today, do not have enough time to maintain health, it is very important to eat good foods with balanced nutritions. Morever, we can not recognize by which food additives or ingredients their foods are made. Since a restaurant is one kind of the businesses, it strives to reduce the cost by using the cheap materials. Particularly, to children who are considered their growths significantly, providing the balanced nutritions is very important. In this point, homemade foods are more trustable and the tool to keep our healths.
Besides, we need to have enough time for conversation with the member of family. Eating homemade foods togather, we have a chance of communication with them. These days, when it comes to education of children, the most important thing is relationship between parents and children. Conversation is the best way to understand thinkings of children and to convey them advices. Through time to have a meal togather, it is possible for family to understand each other. Because some restaurants are in noisy atmosphere so that it is difficult to talk to serious topics which occur among family. In addition, if we invite guests into our home by providing homemade foods, it would be more impressive and more memorable. In terms of this point, eating homemade foods is better than eating outside.
In conclusion, when it comes to the lack of nutrition and converstaion with the member of family, I think that eating at a restaurant is not a good idea. To maintain our health through good foods and to have an opportunity for good relationship, I think that homemade foods play the effective role to us. | |
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