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An ongoing debate exists over whether friends are the most important influence on young adults. Some people say that friends aren’t the most important effect on young adults. However, in my opinion, I strongly think that friends are the most important influence on young people. Of course, just as the English proverbs goes, “a coin has two sides”, I must admit that disadvantages of friends’ effect on life. Nevertheless, it goes without saying that friends are very big influence on young people. There are two logical reasons here.
To begin with, young people have a time with friends than our family. As young people become older, they spend less time with their family and they spend more time with their friends in school. Take one of my friends for example, Lee sing, he got along with his family when he was young. However, as he become older, he more spends time with friends than his family. This thing considered, friends are the most important influence due to the fact that they live longtime with their friends. They can understand each other on the grounds that they live on similar life where school and library, extra activity.
On top of that, young people are given a lot of assistance by their friends. When we will be bad environment, our friends will give a lot of assistance to us. For example, a recent study released by the Korean National Research Center, shows more than two-thirds of the surveyed respondents mentioned that they are given a variant of help by their friends. Considering the fact that we aren’t superman, we need to aid of other people which our friends.
All things considered, I firmly believe that friends are the most important influence on young adults. It is necessary for us to a variant of assistance by friends. If it were not for our friends, we could unhappiness life.
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