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Some people may argues that ~. However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that ~, I have to (dis)agree with it.
To begin with, ~. In other words, ~. Therefore, it can be said that~. There is a great example supporting this idea. Thus, I believe that ~.
In addition, ~. Putting it differently, ~. Therefore, it can be said that~. There is an example supporting this idea. Thus, I believe that ~
All in all, ~. First, ~. Second, ~.
라이팅게시판에서 받은 템플렛인데요
~ 에 뭐가 들어가야하는지 도통 모르겟네요...
이 템플렛으로 에세이 하나 써주시면 정말 감사히 받겠습니다..
아니면... 뭐 이렇게라도..
Some people may argues that (statement). However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that (statement), I have to (dis)agree with it.
To begin with, (Reason#1). In other words,(다른말로 바꿔서 다시 쓰기). Therefore, it can be said that~. There is a great example supporting this idea. Thus, I believe that ~
해주시면 정말 감사드리겠습니다 ㅠㅠ