Q.Teachers should be paid according to how well student perform.
These days, a number of people think that teachers do not have to be paid related to how well they teach. However, contrary to this idea, I strongly believe that teachers should be evaluated by their teaching and students’ score. The fundamental reason behind this is that the teaching evaluation helps teachers to motivate their ability, and(and 앞에 콤마 와야 함) students will be positively influenced by the system.
First of all, the new evaluating system will give strong motivation to teachers.
The underlying reason is that today’s teachers have no purpose to teach hard and eagerly, so they tend to be lazy. As a result, if we evaluate teachers by their performance, they are able to have tremendous motivation, and they will teach more enthusiastically.
For example, when I was in elementary school, my school teacher was so lazy. Even, she was absent in school, but(but 앞에 콤마) nobody could tell her about her fault. Naturally, my score was fallen.
Ever since then, I realized why she taught me that way. She had no purpose to teach me. On the other hand, when I was studying in high school, I could feel that my teacher pour his best effort for students. This is because he was a the best teacher of the school, and he gave a lot of incentives from the school. This example proves that for the teachers, we should change the system .
Moreover, it will positively affect not only students but also parents.
This is largely because they(they가 여기서 학생을 말하는건가요? 확실히 표기할 필요가 있어요. 위에 parents도 쓰셨기 때문에..) don’t have to go to academies to learn the additional study.
Consequently, parents can save a lot of money for their children.
For instance, according to a the study released by Education Department of Seoul National University demonstrates that the parents whose children are the students of evaluating system school tend to save more money than the parents whose children are not the students of non-evaluating system. The former parents are also more satisfied with the teachers than the latter.
This example verifies that the evaluating system can have a possibility to solve the social problem.
In this way, evaluating system can help both the students and the parents.
In conclusion, without any doubt, I firmly believe that teacher should be paid by their ability . The reason is that it will be helpful to the teachers, students, and parents and it can save a lot of money. All in all, I believe that these are the most important factors for making competitive schools.