■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Money guarantees one's happiness | |
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Undoubtedly, money provides people with abundant materials as well as high qualified lives. However, money makes lots of problems in terms of happiness; representitively, conflicts between people and unstable mental conditions. Therefore, money does not guarantee one's happiness.
To begin with, money breaks relationship among people. For example, there was a documentary of a man who had won a lottery 6 years ago. After winning a lottery, as many of his friends tried to flatter him to borrow some of his money, he could not believe anyone even his family. A few years later, he ended up with divorce with his wife and he could not get over shocking from breaking up with her. Unfortunately, he decided to suicide to let all the burdens off. Like this case, money often provokes tragedies of relationship with others.
Moreover, money causes having unstable minds and mental problems. According to statistics, most half of rich people are mentally unstable, especially when they confront economic recession. For instance, Warren Buffet, the second richest guy in the world, said when there is a downfall of stocks, he worries himself so much that he can not get a sleep well. Also it is shown that he usually suffers awful headache. This shows that money is harmful in terms of mental condition.
To sum up, people think they can do anything they want if they have lots of money. Nevertheless money ensures material benefits, there are negative effects on humans' emotions. In a nut shell, money does not offer one's happiness, causing terrible results. | |
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