■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic: People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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The reasons why people attend college or university are different in many cultures.Some people say that
the reason should be sicere desire to learning.But in Korea, people attend college or university because of many social reasons.In other wards,the reason why they attend college or university is connected with other person's behaviors or their views.
Firstly, they think attending college or university is just the right choice.Because over eighty percent high school graduate students go to college or university.They think they are losers if they fail to attend there.In fact, I think it make sense.Actually, there are few good jobs in Korea at which high school or middle school graduate people can attend.They have to choose between attending difficult, dirty or dangerous jobs or just idling away.For these reasons, most of them want to go to college or university as a mandatory course to not being losers.
Secondly, the reason is concerned with Korean parent's thoughts. They think college or university education is connected directly with social status.And I also think it make sense. Because in Korean society, people often judge other persons with their educational capacity. In other wards, Korean people are often judged by their univercity rank.Not just in their workplace but also in marrige, romance or even friendship.Also, Korean parents regard university or college education as a privilege.In past gernerations in korea,there was a fixed social rank.In that social rank, only the highest called yang-ban could get an advanced education.The others could just get a rudimentary education.Even though the fixed social rank is gone,people still regard advanced education,like college or university education,as a privilege.
In conclusion,in Korea,people attend college or university not because they have a sincere desire to study but because many other peripherical reasons.Those reasons are often connected with job oppotunities,social status or their parents' biased view. | |
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