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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Renewable sources of energy will soon replace fossil fuels | |
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In today’s complex society, some people advocate that fossil fuel will still maintain their predominant position as a source of energy. However, I firmly believe that renewable sources of energy will soon become the major source of energy source, making fossil fuel an out-of-date energy source. The
energy one, out-of date
rationale behind this belief is that a lot of research is already underway to
researches have already been
develop renewable energy sources more available to the public. On top of that, people will have no option but to use renewable energy sources in the end.
To begin with, as it is well known, numerous researches are being carried out to make renewable sources of energy more accessible to the public. Those researchers can easily acquire financial assistance from governments since their projects are considered to give much benefit to society and the world. For example, in Korea, the an automobile industry has been manufacturing a hybrid car, which uses hydrogen gas instead of fossil fuels. Consumers are greatly encouraged by the government to buy hybrid cars; this is done by offering tax-reduction to hybrid car owners or sometimes the government pays for a part of the car’s price. Since hybrid cars do not produce any toxic fumes fume and their energy efficiency is almost three times greater than other gasoline cars, governments believe that promoting people to use those eco-friendly cars is worth for their long-term strategy. In this respect, renewable sources of energy really have a great potential to become the next main source of energy.
In addition, according to a recent report by Korean Times, fossil fuel reserves will be completely used up within the next twenty years. In others words, the remaining supply of fossil fuels is not sufficient to meet people’s demand in the future. So, when the fossil fuel supplies are running out, it becomes mandatory rather than optional to use renewable energy sources. Unlike the former dominant energy source, renewable sources of energy can never be exhausted and is extremely eco-friendly since no harmful wastes are produced. In this sense, it is only a matter of time that renewable energy sources becomes become the major source of energy.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that the future of renewable sources of energy is promising and it will definitely replace fossil fuel in people’s lives. The truth of this argument becomes clear when we consider factors such as the abundant financial supports contributes to speeding up the process of finding and making those sources more available to the public, and also people become having to use fossil fuels because they will likely be depleted. As what John F Kennedy said, “Always fix your roof when the sun is shiny”. People must make sure that they find the effective sources of energy before the current dominant source runs out. | |
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