■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important. | |
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It is better for me to live alone without someone's interupting while I go to school or university. However, If I have to live with someone else, I have several condition to pick up a good roomate to focus on my studying. In addition my roommate has to be same sexuality.
First of all, I want my roommate to keep my privacy. Even though we share a same space, I don't want show everything that I have to him. For example, he doesn't need to know how much time I spend for studying or spend money for living because I feel quite bad when someone knows my financial status or my grades in school.
Second, I want my roommate to be very supportable to me. When I face the serious problems such as desease, breaking up with girl friend or other emergency situations, It will be very glad to give me help to get rid of the situation or to listen to my stories. As well, if he studies same field of mine, he can help me or teach me that I don't know and I can also help him some kinds of his misunderstanding. Besides, we can share the thoughts of our studying.
Third, I want a roommate who keeps our space clean. People tend to concentrate on their work more efficiently when the enviroment is clean. It can easily get dirty when two people use the small space. When the space got dirty, germs and bacterias could be generated in the house. That means we are exposed to the enviroment that we can get illness from such as, respiration desease. For this reason I want my roommate to keep clean our house.
To sum up, the best quality of roommate are someone who keep my privacy, help me when I get troubles and keep the space we share clean.
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