■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples. | |
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Although there are a lot of customs in my country, I would introduce the one of the principal custom that everyone in my country follows. It is respecting old people. Some can say it is common thing all over the world but we respect and admire old people strongly and sometimes compulsorily. However, it has many reasons and methods how to show his or her respect to old people.
First of all, we mostly obey what old people say and order. It could seem a little bit unreasonable but there are reasons why it became like that. Since long times ago, when we have a problem which is really hard to get through or solve, we always ask old people about the problem. The reason is that they have already experienced what we are suffering now and many other things. Of course, they have the right solution for the problem and how to keep up our lives. To exemplify what I mean, when I was very young, I used to live with big family including grand parents, three uncles, two aunts and cousins but except for my parents. Once I was very sick for a long time and no one knew the reason of my illness, my grandfather went to the mountain near to get some herb. When he came back with few kinds of herbs, we still didn't know what those were. Somehow, after I had those herbs which had steamed with rice for few days, my sickness went away after a few days. So I learned why old people are respected.
Moreover, old people in my country usually take responsibilities and blames for young people when someone in her or his family committed a bad thing such as a crime. Of course, the person who did a wrong thing get punishment for that but people around him mostly say and think that the his or her parents or grand parents have raised him or her in a wrong way and they have great responsibility of the commitment. It seems unfair and unreasonable but if you think profoundly you would understand.
All the sons and daughter are raised and learned most of things by their parents. For this reason, old people take responsibility for their son's or daughter’s behavior.
In conclusion, if I have a chance to introduce one custom of my country, I would suggest learning how to respect old people in my country. I will explain why we have such a custom and there is nothing to lose when she or he learns this custom.
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