■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Most people prefer having others make a decision for them rather than deciding for themselves. | |
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It is often said that when making decision about one's life, people seem to listen and take other's advice. However, I maintain that although they can refer to as many opinion as possible, eventually they should decide for themselves rather than following other's decision. This is because not everyone's decision may work out for me and people worry about bad result.
First, people have different interest and same decision might not fit into everyone. One significant reason is that everyone have their own unique characteristics and interests. Therefore, when it comes to decision making such as what jobs to take, what major to chose, and who marry with, people listen carefully their tastes. For example, when my sister was considering working out or going to the graduate school, her friend, Tom, advised her to work out in order to make money. He thought that his opinion was similar to her goal. However, she realized that her real dream was to study more and build a futher carrer.
In addition, people expects the bad outcome and do not want to depent on other's decision. This is due to the fact that if the results are on good, people could blame the advisor and their social relationship might be broken. Thus, most people were reluctant to rely large on other's deciding. For instance, my sister regretted the decision. Accordingly, when they meet, my sister was nervous to him and Tom was very sorry to her. Naturally, they less hang out, their relationship was end up broken one.
In brief, deciding for themselves is best way because people have their own interest and the bad resulte lead to broken relationship. All in all, these reasons bring about for many people to decide for themselves in an important things.
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