■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Company employers should work 5days a week | |
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Right after Industrial Revolution, the average time of workers was over 95 hours. It means most employers often worked 6~7days at that time. However, as surrounding and enviroment of working places have been much developed, they provoked the issue of whether company should lesson their working time. Literally, although working 5days is a de facto standard of the world in these days, some people claim that company employers should work more than 5days because of company's material benefits. However I think company employers should work just 5days a week.
There is an adage said 'No play makes Jack a dull boy' which means if people have no time to take a rest, later on they will confront some troubles. Like this proverb, if company employers get 2days off, it can recharge them as well as relieve their stress from hard work. For example, there was a documentary about one of company's employer, working in the factory. At first he thought it would be a efficient way for his company's productivity to work 7days. Unfortunately, working 7days caused severe migraine. Since he was so painful that he could hardly stand and work at all. Ultimately, he ended up with quitting his job. This story proves that workers need some time to take a rest. If they get 2 days off, they can concentrate on their work better, making them work efficiently.
Moreover, there is high possibillity of having their free time with their family if employers work just 5days. According to International Herald Tribune, it was shown that overworking is second reason of divorce. Also almost half of overworkers had unstable family lives. One of those employers said "As I can not see my beautiful daughters often, she can not even recoginize me and now avoids me like a total stranger. It really breaks my heart." Like this case, overworking harms relationship with family.
Ironically, working 5days may seem like causing loss of company's productivity. However, this is not true at all. The truth is that working 5day brings lots of material benefits to company as well as consolidates social structure. In a nut shell, company employers should work 5days a week. | |
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