■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :governments should invest much money on the investigation of universe or not. | |
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spending much money on the investigation of universe is controversal recently. Above of all, I totally agree with this opinion. There are a lot of things you don't know in the world. I think we can't go all around the world in our lives because the world is too huge to go around. However, if we spend much money on investigation of universe, we can get the information about the world easily. That's why I totally agree with spending a lot of money on the investigation of universe. Let me talk about some advantages for my opinion. First of all, we are in really busy society. the world is changed day by day and we should get along with this life style. In other words, we need to get a lot of information about the universe to get along with busy lives and the faster is better to get information. That's why it's good for us to spend much money on investigation of universe.
The second advantage is that we can help the poor people we haven't seen. There are lots of the poor people and they have trouble with poverty. It's the most serious problem for all mankinds. we should help them as possible we can. They are also people and they have obligations to live as people. They don't need to have trouble with poverty for that they were born in another place, so if we investigate universe, we can find a lot of people and help them.
The third advantage is that we can get a variety of different cultures we haven't experienced. In my case, I have never gone abroad before coming here, the U.S. That's why it was interesting and I was so excited to face all of brand new things. Let's think about facing a variety of cultures you have't faced. How wonderful and amazing! It also gives us a lot of wise in life.
As my last notes, I wish I could get a lot of information about other countries and cultures, and people. I can help them and they can also help me. It's awsome to just imagine, so we need to invest money on the investigation of universe. If we invest more money, we can get more infomation.
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