■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : 사람들은 옷을 입는것에 따라 행동이 다르다. agree/disagree | |
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The apprearance is one of the major factors evaluate other people. In addition, it can be an important tool for self-control. Based on my this opinion, I think that the clothing plays the role to make appearance and to express himself or herself. Thus, I totally agree with this statement that people's behaviors may vary according to what they wear.
First, ther clothing is an effective mean to show who we are so that behaviors are different depending on what we wear. In this point, the school uniform can be a good example. When students wear the school uniform, every people recognize not only the fact that they must be students but which school they belongs to. It is impossible for them to behave activities prohibited by the law such as smoking, drinking and things related to sexual issue. 10 years ago, Korean high schools dismissed the rool; all students had to wear the school look because the reason it hindered the freedom of expression. However, as a result, enormous accidents happend by teen agers so that the school uniform reappeared.
Moreover, when people put on active wears, they tend to behave more actively and vividly. It may be becasue the clothing provides us physical convenience as well as becasue it gives psycological convenience. Particularly, in the case of women, they can make active behaviors putting on the pants. Because the skirt makes women feel that they should be chaste, it is possible for them feel psycologically inconvenient with the skirt. Moreover, if someone, either man or woman, wears a new clothing, they try to act more carefully not to give the damage on it. Therefore, their behaviors differ from usual them.
In conclusion, when it comes to the control through the uniform and physical and psycological convenience, people's behaviors can be different from normal it depending on what they wear on. Considering this point, the uniform such as a school look is an effective tool to control the group of students. | |
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