■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Eating homemade food is better than eating out at restaurants or food stands. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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For as long as I can remember, people have been debating the pros and cons of eating homemade food versus eating at restaurants or food stands. From personal experience, I strongly feel that eating outside have many positive benefits for people in society. My two main reasons are as follows : we can save our time to make food on our own and we also have great chance to eat variety kinds of food that we can't make at home.
To begin with, people can save our time because we don't have to make foods when we eat. An important benefit is that women who have their job don't worry about their children's nutrition. One person who illustrates this point is my mother, who has been working at a bank for 25 years. She did not worry about her working when I was born because she could using food stands which always made high quality of nutrition near our house. Thanks to that store, she can concentrate on her working without making food.
Furthermore, we also have great chance to eat variety kinds of food that we can't make at home. In support of this, there are many restaurants that give people a chance to eat unique food. For instance, my uncle really likes sushi. However, to make sushi, we have to know some skills that never easy to learn for publics. For this reason, he often use a sushi store near his house. If that kind of store don't existing in our life, we might have rare chance to eat special foods.
To sum up, I strongly support the idea that eating out has many positive things than eating at home has. The reason that eating outside allows people to use their time properly as well as have a chance to eat special food. In general, I strongly believe that these are the great important factors for people's happy future. | |
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