■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than things that they should do | |
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As the work circumstances have been improved and developed a lot, compared to the past decades, more and more people have tendency to spend their leisure time on what they want to do. However, there are still one big controversial going on whether people should use their free time more on their leisure or on their duties. In my case, I would wholeheartedly support the idea that people need to enjoy their life more if they can manage to do so.
To begin with, the recent society has been changing at a greater rate of speed so that people can achieve satisfiable results despite of pouring less amount of time into work. Then what are you going to do with alll that left over time in weekends? Now that people can afford all those big quotient of duty and time for enjoyment as well, there is no doubt that people should not spend their much time in what they want to do in mind. To illustrate this, it took much more time to finish off a great amount of paper work in offices fifteen years ago, rather now, it is just as easy as typing a keyboard and printing out papers as much as one needs. There has got be a lot more time saved for leisure.
On top of that, more time spending on duties doesn't necesarily mean it will boost up bringing up better results. All that matter is how efficiently people can manage to finish up their works, not amount of time they consume. Then What do we have to do for work in a better condition? It definitely is to take some time off from stressful work and spare their more free time at personal enjoyment. There is no denying that one, who has been refreshed up their minds and get back to work, can work more passionately in their fields. To make this short, people should have time for enjoying their life own, not locking up themselves in a cage of massive workloads.
In conclusion, depite all that tendency that people are spending too much time on their leisure, it is not such a thing to be confined. And it should be rather recommendable not only for better work conditions of 21st century but also recharging people's exhausted and tired mind. | |
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