■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Higher education should be available only to good students. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. | |
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As all of people try to enter the top university following the social trend, some argue that higher education should be restricted only to students who are good at study. However, I strongly believe that the right to access to the higher education has to be open for everyone, because all people are equal in terms of the possibility of success. Considering the purpose of the education, higher education should be available to anybody who wants to study.
First of all, everyone should have the equal opportunity to study and challenge. We cannot judge other people only by the grade they get during the school day. Even though a person was bad in the high school, he or she would success in life after good education in the university. For example, one of my friends, who had low grades in exams but was excellent in computer skills, could be admitted in the university through the open admission system. Due to the job education as well as more knowledge about computers offered by his university, he could be employed successfully to the top computer company after graduation. In this respect, equal opportunity for higher education should be ensured for everyone.
Moreover, learning around various people who have diverse backgrounds and abilities is better for students. Admittedly, what higher education should pursuit is to guide people to become a well-rounded personality. Open admission college enables students not only to experience a variety of people from different cultures, but also to balance between diverse points of view. According to the survey conducted by the Korean educational association, students from open admission college usually do better in communicating with others at work after their graduation and thus perform their assignment more successfully, compared with those from the college whose students are admitted only by grades. This definitely shows the importance of the diversity in learning, the result of the equal availability of higher education.
To sum up, everyone should have the same opportunity for higher education, since we all have the equal potential to be success in life. Furthermore, open admission system also enhances the quality of education, allowing students to experience diversity. With the equal right to access to higher education for everyone, our society can strengthen the basis for our better future. | |
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