■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Nowadays, people put too much emphasis on personal appearance and fashion. | |
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Since history began, human being always has been interested in beauty and has pursued fashion. But, in these days people seem to focus on personal appearance and fashion too much more than ever. However pursuing personal appearance and fashion is necessary for people to live a better life, I strongly believe that this trend went too far and needs to be controlled, for the reasons as follow.
Firstly, today's entertainment industry crossed the line in that many entertainers only care about personal appearance and fashion, rather than developing their talent and performance. Actors and actresses are not judged by their acting ability any more. In my country, it is known fact that it is impossible for a female actress to get a heroin role without plastic surgery, even if she has the gifted talent in acting. And some famous stars are going to fashion show or brand launching show in order to expose their style and image to the media, intending to contract more TV commercials. This kind of behavior should be blamed because it means that they are not concentrate on their own job, acting or singing performance.
Secondly, even normal people tend to focus on appearance and fashion too much, making the other values and the tradition useless. Many young people- especially famales – have no fear to have plastic surgery which was considered to be dangerous and inappropriate, a few decades ago. And they also spend a lot of money shopping fashionable items in the department store only to make themselves more attractive visually, while they do not see other values, such as intelligence, diligence, and morality, Moreover, most people only pay attention to today, forgetting about yesterday. Checking today’s fashion from a internet or TV have became mandatory to commuicate with friends or co-workers in this society. Consequently, precious assets of the past are being disappeared.
To conclude, it is clear that people are putting too much emphasis in personal appearance and fashion. It is because many celebrities care only about showing better appearance and fashionable sense, rather than developing and improving their performance, and because normal people are indulging to improve themselves visually and give attention only to hot trend of the day.
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