■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Are parents best teachers?
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There are some peoples who argue that parents are the best teachers. I agree with their arguement to some degree in an aspect that home education is important. But in fact, It is kind of exaggerate that saying parent's are the best teachers. Because there are many disadvantages in parents' education.
First of all, as parents love thier children too excessively they can not treat their children reasnoblely. For example, there are many parents who treat their children with too generous policy. Even if thier chidren commitee huge mistakes, they just protect their children and blame themselves. This kind of policy is very harmful to their children in the end. Because their children have never been punished in their bad behavior, they are going to do what ever they want to do. On the other hand there are parents who treat their children too harsh. They always blame thier children even if their children's mistakes are trivial things. This is even more bad to thier children. Because everytime thier children are blamed, they lose thier self confidence. This makes them to regard themselves as losers and convince that they can not do anything.
Secondly, parents often give thier biased view to thier children. There are so many things parents want to acheive but they could not. They oblige thier children to achieve that no matter their children want to do that or not. For example, I have a cousin who is very brilliant. And his parents wanted him to being a doctor. Because they always had wanted to be a rich. They were so sure that being a doctor makes thier son to be a rich and it makes him happy. He studied hard and finally he is in a medical school now, but he is not happy at all. Because he always wanted to be a scientist.
In conclusion, though parents play an important roll in an education of their children, they often ruin their children bacause they can not always regulate their love to thier children properly. And they often hinder their children from achieve thier own dreem. Whereas, the idea that 'parents are the best teachers' is not always right.
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