■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all of humanity. Other people take the opposite view and say that money spent on this type of research is wasted. Tell which point of view you agree with and explain why, using specific details and reasons. | |
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With an advent of fastly developing technology and science, human beings are enjoying the previleges those developments give. It is not an exaggeration to say that active and supportive research, along with a huge amount of funds on those fields, technology and science, have achieved such an outcome. Against this backdrop, space research is no exceptional. There are fairly many organizations like NASA which fully supports and do the research about space. However, as the human society is facing more other serious issues, including issues in life science and technological science, money and funds spent on space research should better be spent on other science areas.
There are many advocates of continuing to research on space for many benefits we get from it. It is true that space scientists' endeavor to find out information about our Earth and other planets, further other galaxies and so on have helped humans to take a leap towards a developed our view towards space. People became more familiar with various planets, and organizations like NASA have made significant achievements in human's history on space. From stepping on Moon to buying estates on Moon and planning to build hotel in Moon, there is no doubt that all those funds and expenses spent on space research worth it. Despite this seemingly bright future of space research, there are several flaws in continuing to spend money on space research.
First of all, there are more other fairly serious issue that are frequently mentioned in field of science. It is life science, somewhat about cloning and sperm bank and so on. This issues in field of life science are heatedly debated thesedays. Since life science needs to take approach about human's life, making human's body its object of scientific study, there must be extra care and upgraded facilities which cannot harm human's life. Thus it is somewhat apparent that there should be more money spent in this field of area, making the scientific study environment up to date, and ideal.
Another science field that is in need of more fund that space research does is techonological science field. Some may argue that technological science has already developed and giving many people advantages. However, the future of technological science is never guaranteed. That is, as world society is depending more on technological skills instead of making use of natural resources or so on, continuous research on technological science is not even a question. To make peoples' live more convinient than now, and to take more approach towards developed machines and robots that benefits and fulfills humans' lives, technological science should be more actively researched along with more amount of money spent on it.
Clearly, there cannot be such a 'waste' of money spent on research in the field of science. Space research once needed and has spent a large amount of money and could make such an improvement and development. Like this, it is time for life science and technological science to recieve the baton. There must be more active researches on those two areas with stable amount of funds, instead on space research. By space research handing over the baton to life science and technological science, the future of humanity will be even more brighter and promised.
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