■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :The decision that people make quickly are always wrong. | |
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There are many ways that people have to chose and walking through like the poem, "The way that I did not go." Sometimes people asked me to made my mind as soon as possible. They said it would not changed a lot although I considering the decisions that I would chose. Some people said the best ideal is that the fist answer came out from your mind when you thought about the question.
Most of all, it is dangerous to decide my mind without think enough. For example, I went to Europe for a month without enough thinking. I made my heart suddenly because there was a cheap flight ticket to go to Europe. I did not research a lot, I went to Spain only because the flight was cheap. When i arrived there, I did not know what I could watch and where I should go to. I realized that actually I wasted money.
Moreover, it is better to think as much as I could. It does not mean that think as long as I could. It means considering many things that I possible to chose and asking to someone who had same or similar questions before. Others experience also help to decide my way. For instance, there was a short time to decide to which university I could apply after taking the exam for Universities in Korea. I had only 3 choices that I could apply and I also had a few time to think. I asked to my father and he said it is better to chose the major about computer. He said it is always good to think curruent issue. I accepted my father's idea and I have not regret that decision.
In conclusion, for the best decision, it is better to decide my heart with deep thought. It will bring less regret and less failure. On the whole, it would be wise for people who make their mind carefully when they have to decide something. | |
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