>>*capitalize "I"nternet*
>>they 를 문장속에 쓸때, 헷갈리지 않게, 그게 students를 뜻하는것인지 다른것들을 뜻하는것인지
구별해주세요. (귀찮더라도; ^^)
With the advent of the internet, people have experienced a lot of changes in various areas.(aspects)
>(0r) = The advent of the Internet brought a great amount of change in various aspects.
Nowadays, students often use the Internet as their educational tool. Although someone cast some people doubt about the effect of the internet on students, I believe there are some advantages the internet offers to students. First, they students can use live tutoring program on the internet, besides it Internet provides students with an appropriate discussion room. (=Internet allows students to discuss materials online)
Most of all, live tutoring programs on the internet give students qualitive qualified lectures. Some students cannot understand their classes in at school. Because it is limited to ask all the questions to their teachers, most of them students pass the parts unknownly. >Most of students do not ask all the questions they might have because of limitation of time. Live tutoring programs are helpful to such students in that they students can rewind the lectures as many times as they want. A survey by an educational Internet broadcast shows that more than 60% of students in Korea are paying off pay to take live tutoring programs. (pay 한다는것보다 그냥 students take the programs..이런식이낫겟죠;)
This result proves the effect of the programs. Therefore, even the teachers in school school teachers should encourage their students to take good tutoring programs on the Internet.
In addition, the Interent offer favorable discussion rooms to students. Even if discussing with others is good for futher and effective study, it is hard for the time-pressed students to gather in the certain space. > We all know that discussion is such an effective study method but there is certainly spacial limitation offline. However, thanks to the Internet, they students can chat with classmates about the their studies at home. For example, when I was in at the high school,( or when I was a high school student, ) I opened my hompage for my studies. In the online space, I and my friends prepared for our exams and reports exchanging useful information.>> I used my own web cafe(or blog) to share useful information to prepare for exams with friends.
Moreover, when I asked questions on my board, one of my friends wrote his answers to me in within a day. Were it not for the system, If there was no online blog(or Internet), I would have had hard time to study only all by myself. Thus, blogs for students are necessary.
In conclusion, the Internet helps students to study easily by giving qualitive qualified live tutoring programs and convenient place to discuss about the study materials. For those reasons, we should not underestimate the significant benefits of the Internet for the effective study. |