단어선택이라든가 전체적인 흐름은 아주 좋은거 같네요 ^^ 가끔 한국말에서 영어로 바꿀때 messed up
된 부분이 있긴 하지만 그런것들을 simplify 하려고 노력하시고 조금만 신경쓰신다면 아주 좋은 글이
될것 같습니다. ^^ ( 영어에서 문장이 길다고해서 좋은 문장이 아니예요) 조금이나마 도움이 됬음
좋겠네요 ^^
There are a myriad of challenges and dilemmas which we must face at least once in our lives.
Some people just try to avoid themhardship, and the others face and surmount them. However, those who try to challenge do not always get good results; some people fail and some people succeed. Everytime we make decisions we have to consider whether to take a challenge or not. and If I am at the given situation when I have to decide my destiny whether to face or avoid the dilemma I will choose to take the challenge it even though it can break my heart and future. If I have choice, I would choose to challenge my life(myself, my career.._) despite of its risk.
It would be really comfortable if I do only the tasks which I am already specialized at. Moreover, there is actually almost no chance of making mistakes and taking risks.> It's hardly to make any mistakes in those tasks, in other words, there are no risk. However, what do I get from performing the tasks which I practiced over and over, and I already mastered? I guarentee that there is no special gains from it. On the contrary, seeking a new field that I have not experienced before is very stimulating. I can get an opportunity to learn a new skill. Feeling the moment when we achieved something which we used to be unhandy is hard to explain with a human language. It would be hard to explain the impression/enjoyment from achieving(completing) challenge. On top of that, no one can deny that the result after taking risks is invaluable. No challenge, no achievement. Just like no pain, no gain. It is another absolute truth that no one can deny.
In addition, taking risks even though it can be critical to my dream, always results in a good moodeven when we fail. We can learn the lessons that numerous trials and fails can lead us to success overall, and there is nothing that is easy in this world. This important lesson can help us, when we when we get out to the real society, go into society(make our debut in society) to never give up on our dreams and goals. Because of this challenging spirit, for me for example, I could finally become a lawyer: my dream job I ever dreamed of becoming. In contrast, a person without any willingness to challenge would become a man who easily gives up and tries to depend on someone else hoping others to do everything for him. No more moving forward for the man unfortunately.
Considering the long run consequences, even though relying on the tasks which are very easy for me seems to be comfortable and challenging seems to be a gigantic loss, I will live my life with higher aims which are very difficult and beyond my ability for now, but dreaming that I will soon achieve my goals. >> too long one- sentence...>> In short run, easy tasks are comfortable while challenging tasks bring a gigantic loss to our future(lives). But considering long run consequences, living our lives with higher aims,challenge or hardship help us to achieve our goals/dreams come true.
This will lead to me to have a more illuminated and happy future! |